You have provided a proficient understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why for you individual work, but not elaborating on where ideas were taken from, or how you came to a final decision for the final group products.
You need to: 1) Explain in more depth why your products were chosen, as well as mentioning ideas taken from your other group member's and explaining why 2) Explain why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience
You have provided an excellent analysis of your research into and production of ancillary texts, explaining clearly why the final product was chosen as well as mentioning some ideas that were taken on board. You have explained why your products appeal to your target audience and the different connotations. It would be good to mention inspirations you took from your research into your own work
You have provided a proficient understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why for you individual work, but not elaborating on where ideas were taken from, or how you came to a final decision for the final group products.
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1) Explain in more depth why your products were chosen, as well as mentioning ideas taken from your other group member's and explaining why
2) Explain why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience
You have provided an excellent analysis of your research into and production of ancillary texts, explaining clearly why the final product was chosen as well as mentioning some ideas that were taken on board. You have explained why your products appeal to your target audience and the different connotations. It would be good to mention inspirations you took from your research into your own work
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